... because i like to offer critical comments ^^;
some things that would help her out would be shortening the neck - while she would have a slender neck, it wouldn't be so long. and her arms are far too short and small for the side of her head and shoulders. they need a bit more weight to them.
but god... i'm still impressed at your coloring. which makes up for any anatomy problems.
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